A Slice in Time
In the bright sunlight streaming insistently (the time! the time!) through the blinds, Atch is hurrying to take the first turn at the apartment's single toilet, his towel perched haphazardly around his hips, an unlighted cigarette dangling from lips that are moving:
Woog, hurry up and finish your breakfast!
around his poison stick.
Meanwhile, said dawdler delicately swirls a french fry in his saucer of ketchup, sniffs it, and brings it up to his open mouth, making gustatory smacking noises. This is followed by a lengthy swig from his mug of chocolate milk. The deliberateness of his eating makes us want to scream with one accusing finger pointing at the clock, save for the thought that it might ruin the appetite of our gourmet-in-the-making. Surely there must be a method to his madness.
Ignored for the nonce, the baby, deposited on the rubber floor mats amidst hand-me-down toys, protests this momentary abandonment by crawling from the living room to the breakfast table. He pulls himself up by the rungs of the first available chair, and attempts to yank the stuffed cushion out from under his Manong Woog:
Ba-bap-bap-bapbap-baaaap!
he screeches in frustration, falling heavily on his diapered behind, before pulling himself up to begin all over again:
Cchthhh-cthh-cthhh-cthhh!
he enunciates, spittle flying from four gritted teeth.
Woog bursts into laughter and hands over a fry. Appeased, Eli settles back down on the floor and bites hard into deep fried potato.








3 comments:
i really love how you write...
you got published, didn't you?
(thnx by the way for droppin by my blog.)
It's like I'm reading a best-selling storybook. :D I could picture Eli and Woog clearly in my mind as they savored every bit of the french fried potato. :)
And I had the gall to call myself a writer!
I am now officially your fan (touching my forehead to the floor).
Glad that at least the wacky names of our pets had you laughing :)
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